This is my blogging feedback from my teacher after the second health check. I have gone up one mark from last time as you can see from 13 to 14 which has now changed my grade from C to B.
My teachers comments are very good as she has said that I have 50 posts and that I'm including good detail.
My improvements however, are;
* To embed ICT more into the blog instead of using links.
* Try to not blog in order as this will help presentation and organisation if similar posts were linked together.
* I should also try to take photos of handouts less and use ICT more and should use photo presentations or ICT to make the photos easier to view.
* I should now post a completed storyboard on to the blog.
I think this is a fair grade to be honest because even though I have improved since last time I still need to improve quite a bit with presentation and ICT skills but I am happy with the extra mark because my Grade has now changed to a B. For the first and final blogging check I'd like to get a 16 which is 2 more marks from my current mark now because that is grade A. 
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